🧬 IELTS Band 9 vs Band 6 Essay: One Task 2 Answer Rewritten Line by Line

This free IELTS Writing lesson puts an IELTS band 9 essay and a band 6 essay side by side on the same exam-style Task 2 question about AI in education, then compares them sentence by sentence. Each change is labelled with the criterion it affects: Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, or Grammatical Range and Accuracy. You learn the eight upgrade moves that recur in every high-band essay, see a realistic band 7 rewrite as the bridge between the two, and get a plain-language self-check rubric and a table of mistakes candidates make when they try to write band 9. Two interactive practice sets (choose the higher-band sentence; identify the criterion a change improves), a paragraph rewrite task with a model answer and an eight-question quiz let you test the moves immediately. It suits adult candidates at band 5.5 to 7.0 who already write complete essays and want to know exactly what to change.